Synopsis Mk1

This was my first attempt at a film synopsis, since writing this i have made many changes to my story based on feedback.
Synopsis
Film ratings green screen BBFC.
Equilibrium – living normally, documentary style as if the camera is a real camera and he is being interviewed.
Graphics, production logo…
Disruption of equilibrium – framed, friends don’t believe him. Arrest warrant in police station.
Documentary style- police
Realisation of equilibrium disruption – police officer’s house, police looking for him, list of habits information about him as if they have been building a file on him for years, police don’t know they have file on him, something isn’t right.
In family’s house pleading with friends that he didn’t do anything.
Ring on the doorbell, runs out the back while friends try to stop him, police at the door.
Titles, style police report? “When even your friends turns on you for something you don’t even know about”
Police station, police trying to find out where he could have gone, orders from their superiors say he has to be found but police aren’t allowed to find out why.
Woods at night, running first person shots form police with torches chasing character.
Character’s friend, taken by police, don’t know where they’re being taken even police don’t know, orders came from their superiors. Generic “where are you taking me!” sort of dialogue.
Police asking their superiors why they are after the character, even their superiors don’t know where the orders came from and advise the police that it may be from a higher power such as he a government agency.
Titles “the people whose job it is to chase him down don’t even know why they do it”
Repair, character trying to find out who framed him by going to some cyber criminals, dark, low-key back alley.
They take him to their house, low-key, computers, hot, dark; tell him he’s way over his head, conspiracy theories.
Close up of cyber criminal “there is one thing you could do….”
Character disguising himself.
Graphics (security camera shot from up high zooms in on his face).
Police station “found him”.
Chase through the streets, lots of different shots of the police chasing him (first person, trolley shots,)
Police station “he got away again, he is just an ordinary guy, why the hell can’t you guys keep up with him!”
More chasing shots.
Cyber criminal’s house zooms out from the screen as they have hacked into the security cameras watching character “he might actually make it”.
25. Close up of cyber criminal’s face showing him looking excited “